11.07.2008

Friday Flash Fiction 55 -


Ziggle zag,
Friggle frag!

What have you not already said?
I think redundant lives under a rock.

Oh, you beg to differ?
Well then I'll just keep feeling the vibration of your tongue.

Forgive me for my placid grace,
It's just that I remember this place.

Then it stops.

Abruptly.

Oh, but it's not done!
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Flash Fiction Friday
Every Friday, I compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less.
If you want to join in the fun and games and give it a try...
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10 comments:

Mojo said...

Just oblique enough that your reader can apply it to anything that fits. I'm betting if you asked 100 people to interpret this you'd get 100 different answers.

Very mysterious!

BTW, have I mentioned that I absolutely love your header graphic? No? Well I do. It's awesome.

Liquid said...

Yeah, Mojo.....I've been swimming in other peoples fish bowls lately and my feelings are well, yes, quite oblique.

Redunant confused the rat!

Thank you for visiting and for your kind comment regarding my header. Yep, in a fish bowl.

Have a great evening!

ciara said...

a 55 that makes someone think is always good...and that darned redundancy always rearing its ugly head. hehe great job, liquid. :)

Mona said...

redundancy is always rampant everywhere. only memories remain...

KB said...

You did a great job here. Thanks for stopping by my blog, I'll be back to visit you again for sure.

G-Man said...

KB???
Where's your 55?

Liquid, very interesting, and very well written. Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Great Week-End!!

KB said...

I'm workin on it G x

Akelamalu said...

Ah redundancy is a bad thing. :(

Great 55.

Randal Graves said...

I fifth, sixth and seventh what everyone else said.

Liquid said...

And I appreciate each of you who take the time to visit me. You have NO idea how cool I think my collection of blogging friends are.

Ya'll ROCK!

:)-