10.10.2008

Friday 55.....#4

(the gate)

Open the gate.
Close the gate.
Ride in the middle
And you'll be safe....
it's late.
Open the gate.
Secure the gate.
If it's a good day,
we won't be late.
You know it's your turn
so please
just open your gates.
I'll be there this time.
Just open your eyes
Give us more time.
(For Dawn)
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Flash Fiction Friday
Every Friday, I compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less.
If you want to join in the fun and games
and give it a try...post your story and report to the boss -
G-Man!

9 comments:

Missy said...

Great 55! As a lover of poetry, I get stoked seeing others enjoying it as well. Nicely done.

Have a nice weekend

G-Man said...

Awesome 55 Liquid!!!
Thanks for this pretty piece of prose....
Have a Great Week-End...G

Daisy said...

Very nice, Suzanne. :)

Mojo said...

Wow... tug many heartstrings lately? That's beautifully written. I hope the message gets through. Truly.

And did you take the photo that went along with it? I love that!

Oh, and I meant to mention it before and forgot... your header image just flat rocks! (So does your avatar for that matter.)

Mona said...

That is such a nice verse! :)

Akelamalu said...

Nice verse!

ciara said...

great poetry, liquid. like mojo said the accompanying photo is wonderful. good job on the 55 :)

Shinade said...

Oh wow this is really good!! Oh my you are so very talented!!

I am running to slow to watch Simon oh pooh!!

Thanks for running my add:-)))

Struke said...

I love the photo. Great stuff.