(the gate)
Open the gate.
Close the gate.
Ride in the middle
And you'll be safe....
it's late.
Open the gate.
Secure the gate.
If it's a good day,
we won't be late.
You know it's your turn
so please
just open your gates.
I'll be there this time.
Just open your eyes
Give us more time.
(For Dawn)
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Flash Fiction Friday
Every Friday, I compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less.
If you want to join in the fun and games
and give it a try...post your story and report to the boss -
G-Man!
If you want to join in the fun and games
and give it a try...post your story and report to the boss -
G-Man!
8 comments:
Awesome 55 Liquid!!!
Thanks for this pretty piece of prose....
Have a Great Week-End...G
Very nice, Suzanne. :)
Wow... tug many heartstrings lately? That's beautifully written. I hope the message gets through. Truly.
And did you take the photo that went along with it? I love that!
Oh, and I meant to mention it before and forgot... your header image just flat rocks! (So does your avatar for that matter.)
That is such a nice verse! :)
Nice verse!
great poetry, liquid. like mojo said the accompanying photo is wonderful. good job on the 55 :)
Oh wow this is really good!! Oh my you are so very talented!!
I am running to slow to watch Simon oh pooh!!
Thanks for running my add:-)))
I love the photo. Great stuff.
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