9.12.2008

Friday Flash 55.....

When I was just a girl, I used to have so much fun. Taking long walks down to the creek. Kicking rocks as I slowly walked, gatherd a few to make turtles jump. Skipping and hopping, swooshing and popping, would be these various stones I took. My, how I miss the days that are gone

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Flash Fiction
Every Friday, I compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less.
If you want to join in the fun and games
and give it a try...post your story and report to the boss -

17 comments:

KB said...

This takes me back to when I was a wee girl. Congrats on your first 55,you did a great job.

Diane Vogel Ferri said...

Every time I see a little creek like that I want to take my shoes off and wade in - I have the same simple happy memories.

Cliff said...

You always can look back at the "good old days" but you can look forward to many "good new days."

Have a super day!

Anonymous said...

What beautiful memories!

Cherish them!

=) Bella

S said...

Ah yes, the carefree days of childhood!
Welcome to Flash Fiction, I for one, am a flake.

Have a lovely weekend!

DivaJood said...

I am giving you an award. Come pick it up.

Mona said...

One does miss one's childhood.. The best part of one's life!

I love the photos here & also the self portraits ! :)

Akelamalu said...

Lovely memories and all in 55 words! :)

Mine's up too.

ozymandiaz said...

I get to relive my childhood every day
then agian, I never grew up

Ghost Dansing said...

happy birthday Liquid...... you're ridin' with lady luck

SandyCarlson said...

That's a great story, Liquid! You captured some nice atmosphere in so few words. I love the way you write.

God bless, friend.

This Is My Blog - fishing guy said...

Liquid: I am haunted by the streams of my youth and all the wonderful times spent in them. The grandkids still love to through rocks into the lake when we are done fishing.

Panaderos said...

Nice little story and the accompanying photograph helped set the scene. :)

G-Man said...

Well, well, well....look who just shot off her first 55!!!
And a DAMN good one I might add!!!
Very descriptive, and very nostalgic, thank you so much Liquid for joining in the fun..
You are a very welcome addition to our talent pool...G

jillie said...

Hey there...thanks for stopping by. G-Man is definitely the boss!

Hope to see you again ;o)

Connie said...

That was nice, Liquid. I felt like I was right there with you. :)

James Goodman said...

Great 55! Very vivid imagery going on here. :D